Hey, wussup! This is kind of random since we don’t know each other, but I just read your chapter and really enjoyed it! I found the idea of Paul falling in love with Audrey just from seeing her photograph really sweet and amusing. His determination to convince everyone that she is special, while the rest of the band sees him as a lovesick fool, made their interactions genuinely entertaining. I also enjoyed the playful chaos between the band members, especially Dave trying to keep everyone focused on rehearsal. The historical setting and the music references give the story a lovely atmosphere. I'm curious to see how Paul's feelings develop and whether he ever gets to meet Audrey! Also, I got an idea inspired by your story that I’d love to share with you if you’re interested!
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miarosaa_r on Chapter 1 Wed 04 Nov 2026 05:11PM UTC
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