This chapter was an absolute emotional masterpiece, and your writing is phenomenal! You captured Artemis and Billy's complex dynamic so brilliantly, balancing raw, heartbreaking angst with a tender, hard won happy ending that felt entirely earned. From the tense, devastating grief to that gorgeous bittersweet final kiss I was completely hooked and moved to tears. Thank you for writing such an unforgettable and brilliant alternative ending
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Jesskiren01 Wed 04 Nov 2026 10:17AM UTC
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