Hey, wussup! This is kind of random since we don’t know each other, but I just read your chapter and really enjoyed it! I found Senkuu’s attempts to understand Luna’s fears and make her feel comfortable really interesting, especially how he uses his scientific explanations to connect with her. The tension between Senkuu and Kohaku was also compelling, and I liked how the chapter explored the conflict between old village traditions and personal freedom. Senkuu’s decision to abolish the pairing rules showed how much he values his friends. And his little attempt to charm Luna with ice cream and cherry blossoms was adorable! Also, I got an idea inspired by your story that I’d love to share with you if you’re interested!
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miarosaa_r on Chapter 5 Tue 03 Nov 2026 10:06PM UTC
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