Comment on the Children's Crusade

  1. Forimadreamer (Guest) on Chapter 5 Fri 30 Oct 2026 05:52AM UTC

    Such a great chapter again. I loved the letters but mostly what I love about your writing is how Garrick and Imogen are this mix of kid and grownup. It’s really hard to pull off and you did such a good job!
    Also Xaden asking about Garrick’s mum and saying “I don’t know what I’d do without my mom” broke my heart a little, how dare you.
    Oh and another detail I love is the fact Garrick’s name is really Garrioch. I think it’s a wonderful nod to their culture (I assume it’s a cultural thing and not just a nickname) and I would love to see more of Tyrrish culture (at least your version of it).

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