Comment 107 on What is This Feeling? - damrushed - Ben 10 - All Media Types, Generator Rex | fanfiction.lol

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Rolaplayor101 on Chapter 1 Fri 14 Aug 2026 10:18PM UTC

Good luck with writing the rest!! I think you have a firm foundation plot-wise! It could use some better handling when it comes to sentence structure and originality, but again, this is your first fic and I think you should stick with it! I also suggest reading some more books and taking notes on what you like about the writing style of those, and try to practice copying that!

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1. damrushed on Chapter 1 Mon 14 Sep 2026 06:03AM UTC
  
  thank you so much!!! i really appreciate your comment <333
  
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2. 1. Rolaplayor101 on Chapter 1 Mon 14 Sep 2026 12:16PM UTC
    
    No problem! Thanks for writing!
    
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