Preface

The Crystal's Heart
Posted originally on the fanfiction.lol at https://fanfiction.lol/works/540.

Rating:

Teen And Up Audiences

Archive Warning:

No Archive Warnings Apply

Categories:

Femslash (F/F), General (non relationship-focused)

Fandoms:

Kirby (Video Games), Hoshi no Kaabii | Kirby: Right Back at Ya!

Relationships:

Bun | Tuff & Fumu | Tiff & Kirby & Original Character(s), Bandana Waddle Dee & Bun | Tuff & Fumu | Tiff & Kirby & Original Character(s), Fumu | Tiff/Original Character(s)

Characters:

Original Kirby Character(s), Original Character(s), Kirby (Kirby), Bun | Tuff, Fumu | Tiff, Meta Knight, King Dedede, Escargon | Escargoon (Kirby), Bandana Waddle Dee, Demon Beasts | Monsters (Hoshi no Kaabii)

Additional Tags:

Originally Posted Elsewhere | Cross-Posted, Post-Canon, Post-Hoshi no Kaabii | Kirby: Right Back at Ya!, Short Fic, Cursing & Swearing, Possession, 4Kids Dub

Language:

English

Series:

Part 1 of the crystal's heart series 💎

Stats:

Published: 2026-09-04 Updated: 2026-09-18 Words: 1,861 Chapters: 4/?

The Crystal's Heart

by ramen

Summary

The residents of Cappy Town are finished rebuilding Cappy Town but some stuff happened.

(NOW WITH: commentary from me in the ending notes for most of the episodes)

Chapter 1: The Future of Cappy Town!

Chapter Notes

See the end of the chapter for notes

Everyone is finished rebuilding Cappy Town. Lakisha and Jonique were finished with Kawasaki's. "Well, that's the last of them! Let's have a break!" Jaylee's Dad said.

"Jonique, one simple answer, we are done." Jaylee's mom replied.

Jaylee held a flower, which is for Tiff, the flower is a rose. "This flower is for you, Tiff." Jaylee said while blushing.

"Thank you, Jaylee." Tiff replied.

"Poyo!" Kirby ran to the two of the kids.

"Hello Kirby, it's nice to see you today."

Before Jaylee could continue to talk to Kirby, Jaylee heard some footsteps. "What was that?" Jaylee questioned. Kikker and Zuri saw three shadowy figures. Dark Jaylee, Dark Snail, and N.M.E Sales Guy, who survived the destruction of Nightmare's Fortress.

"What are you guys doing here?" Tuff questioned.

"We are here to beat you guys up!" Dark Snail grumbled. Jaylee grabbed her water gun. Jaylee's mom and dad ran to Jaylee and fought with Dark Jaylee. Jaylee's mom used her sword that she used in the war, and Jaylee's dad used his ax from the war.

"This is just like our battle with Nightmare." Jaylee's Dad commented. Dark Snail grabbed Jaylee.

"YOU GUYS!" Jaylee yelled.

"Kabu! Send the Warp Star!" Kabu sent the Warp Star to Kirby and Kirby got on the Warp Star.

"Thank you for our battle!" Dark Jaylee said. The Dark Trio ran to a hill that was the same hill that Kirby and Knuckle Joe fought in. Dark Snail tied up Jaylee.

"We are going to possess you." N.M.E. Sales Guy announced to Jaylee.

"WHY?" Jaylee cried.

"Just shut up." Dark Snail snapped.

"Poyo!"

"You guys are here already?" Jaylee questioned.

"Yes, we are here," Tiff replied. Dark Jaylee grabbed their sword. "Kirby! Suck it up!" Tiff requested. Kirby sucked up Dark Jaylee's sword and turned into Sword Kirby. Dark Jaylee grabbed another sword. Sword Kirby fought with Dark Jaylee.

Tuff untied Jaylee. "Thank you, Tuff!" Jaylee smiled.

"No problem, Jaylee. Here is your water gun." Tuff said.

"Thank you," Jaylee stood up and held her water gun. "This is what you three fools get!" Jaylee yelled.

N.M.E Salesguy grabbed the remote to possess Jaylee. "Jaylee, snap out of it!" Meta Knight cried. Jaylee's Warp Star changed color. Tiff sees Jaylee's Warp Star and grabbed it. Jaylee fully turned into Dark Star.

"HAHAHA!" Dark Star chuckled. Dark Star grabbed a bow. Dark Star walked to Kirby while using their bow and almost shoot him with the bow but while Dark Star was going to slice Kirby, Meta Knight grabbed Galaxia and sliced the machine that turned Jaylee into Dark Star, Blade Knight and Sword Knight also helped Meta Knight with the machine. Dark Star turned back into Jaylee and fainted.

At Castle Dedede, Jaylee grabbed her glasses. "What happened?" Jaylee questioned.

"You got possessed by that machine!" Tuff answered.

"Oh," Jaylee said. "Who beaten the machine?" Jaylee questioned again.

"Sword Knight, Blade Knight and I did." Meta Knight answered. Jaylee's Mom, Dad, Sir Ebrum, and Lady Like walked to Jaylee.

"Jaylee, Are you okay?" Lakisha exclaimed.

"I am," Jaylee said. "Thank you all for helping me." Jaylee hugged everyone and a star iris appeared.

Chapter End Notes

Here's some advice I would give younger me (I was twelve writing this, for the record):

• Don't type in all caps when someone screams/yells in the fics.

• Maybe be creative with names?

• At least Dark Star is a thing in the Kirby universe, just not in the possessed way, it's just a planet from Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards.

• Is Dark Snail supposed to be an EVIL version of Escargoon? If so, explain to the readers how Dark Snail came to be, same with Dark Jaylee, especially since Dark Star is a thing here

Chapter 2: Jaylee's Little Robot Toy

Chapter Summary

Jaylee gets a robot frog but the rest of the Star Team except for Kirby is suspicious of the frog.

Chapter Notes

This chapter is based on the 15th episode (12th episode for the 4Kids version) called Kirby's Pet Peeve (Birth? Kirby's Younger Brother in the sub).

See the end of the chapter for more notes

Jaylee and her parents were in Gengu's toy store to get a toy because it was her birthday. Jaylee found a robot frog and ran to Gengu. "Jaylee, wait up!" Jonique said. Lakisha and Jonique ran to see Jaylee at the cash register waiting for her parents. Lakisha bought the robot toy for $5.

"Thank you so much." Gengu said to Lakisha.

"You're welcome." Lakisha responded.

Jaylee and her parents walked to Castle Dedede. "Why don't you give the frog a name?" Lakisha told Jaylee.

"I'll name it Froggie," Jaylee said. "Hello, Froggie!" Jaylee smiled.

"Ribbit." Froggie croaked. The Bell Family got to Castle Dedede and Jaylee walked to her girlfriend's room to put Froggie on her side. Tiff walked to her room to see a robotic frog but she didn't question it.

"Hey, sister!" Tuff said to Tiff.

"Hello, brother." Tiff replied.

"Hey, what is that frog doing here, don't tell me that it's going to possess Jaylee." Tuff questioned.

"One, I think Jaylee put the frog in the bed, and two, no, the frog is not going to possess Jaylee." Tiff answered.

"Poyo!" Kirby said.

Jaylee was in the kitchen to eat some food but she heard some hopping from Froggie. "Oh, hey, Froggie. Let's go outside." Jaylee said to Froggie.

"Ribbit." Jaylee and Froggie walked to the beach

"Look at that, Sire, Jaylee has a pet frog." Escargoon said.

"Let's capture that monster." King Dedede said to Escargoon.

"Sire, I'm pretty sure that Jaylee isn't a monster. At least, I don't think so." Escargoon asked.

"Not Jaylee, the frog." King Dedede hit Escargoon in the head.

Escargoon continued to drive the Royal Racecar to the beach. Tiff, Tuff, and Kirby walked to the beach to follow Jaylee. At the beach, Jaylee sat next to Froggie and told it something about Tiff. Escargoon slowly creeps up to Froggie to catch it. "Froggie!" Jaylee yelled.

"Ribbit!" Froggie cried.

"How dare you!" Jaylee cried.

"Jaylee, Froggie is a monster, it was made by Nightmare." Tiff said.

"Froggie, is that true?"

"Ribbit." Froggie croaked.

"Froggie said it's not true."

"Jaylee, it's a frog, how can it speak?" Tuff said.

"I don't know."

"Poyo?"

"Ribbit." Froggie croaked. Froggie hopped to the sea to self-destruct. Jaylee ran to Froggie to save it. Froggie’s screen counted down to five. Jaylee reached Froggie and tried to save it. Froggie exploded. Jaylee got back to the shore.

"FROGGIE!" Jaylee cried tears. A piece of Froggie showed up on the shore and Jaylee picked it up. Gengu, Lakisha, and Jonique walked to the beach. Gengu was holding a plush of Froggie and Lakisha grabbed the plush of Froggie and hugged it.

"This happened to Kirby with the Robot Pet." Gengu sighed. Kirby, Tiff, and Tuff walked to Jaylee and hugged her. A star iris appeared.

Chapter End Notes

• I do like the sub name of eNeMeE (Nightmare in the original) sprinkled in with the dub names for the rest of the cast.

• I didn't add it to the ending notes for chapter one but I really love the star iris ending, it's just like the original show.

• Unlike the original episode with Robot Pet, Froggie comes back, a hot take incoming from the author (but not really because I'm the author): Younger me should've kept Froggie DEAD.

Chapter 3: The Return of a Knight and a Dame

Chapter Summary

Jonique and Lakisha would want to be Star Knight and Storm Dame again.

Chapter Notes

See the end of the chapter for notes

Lakisha and Jonique woke up from their dreams. "I miss Garlude." Lakisha sighed.

"I married Meta Knight and Jecra in my dream." Jonique said.

"That's great, Jonique." Lakisha said.

Lakisha and Jonique walked to the kitchen to make breakfast for Lady Like, Sir Ebrum, and the kids. Lakisha and Jonique had coffee for themselves, wine for Sir Ebrum and Lady Like, and water for the kids and Kirby. Lakisha sighed again. "Lakisha, what's wrong?" Jonique questioned.

"I miss everyone that we lose in that war." Lakisha said.

"I do too." Jonique sighed.

They continued to cook breakfast. "Do you remember when we had armor?" Jonique questioned. Lakisha nodded.

"I think that some people didn't know that we were Storm Dame and Star Knight." They chuckled. The Ebrum family, Kirby, Jaylee, Meta Knight, Sword Knight, and Blade Knight walked to the kitchen to see the food being done and also to see Jaylee's parents talk about their aliases. "Oh hello everyone!" Lakisha exclaimed. Everyone said hello to Jaylee's parents.

"We will be back." Jonique and Lakisha walked to their room to get their armor on. After 2 minutes, the Star Warriors found their armor. Star Knight and Storm Dame walked back to the kitchen.

"Okay so first, I get possessed by my former workers from Nightmare Enterprises, then Froggie somewhat died, and now this." Jaylee said

"This is like the calmest thing in your life, what do you mean?" Star Knight said to Jaylee. Jaylee ignored her dad. Star Knight sighed.

"Hello Star Knight and Storm Dame, No time, long see." Meta Knight spoke to the Star Warriors. Star Knight and Storm Dame smiled underneath their armor.

"Meta Knight, how did you, Star Knight, and Storm Dame meet?" Tuff questioned.

"It all started in the war, Lakisha and Jonique were fighting a monster made by Nightmare."

A flashback showed Lakisha and Jonique fighting monsters with their weapons. "Jonique, I'm pretty sure that an ax isn't a good weapon."

"At least it's better than what Mace Knight had."

"Jonique, look out!" Meta Knight saw Jonique almost getting attacked by the monster, ran to the monster, and stabbed it.

"Oh hello." Lakisha said.

"Hello, please be more careful with the monsters." Meta Knight almost walked away.

"Wait, can we join you, and who are those 2 people?" Jonique questioned.

"To answer your first question, sure, to answer your last question, the person on my left is Garlude and the one on my right is Jecra." Meta Knight answered.

"Do you guys want some armor?" Jecra asked. Lakisha and Jonique nodded. The Star Warriors walked to get armor.

"We didn't hear your names." Garlude said.

"I'm Lakisha, the one without glasses is Jonique."

"I hope that we will survive!" Jonique smiled. The flashback ended. Star Knight sighed and grabbed a picture of Garlude, Jecra, Meta Knight, Storm Dame and himself. Storm Dame, Jaylee, and Meta Knight hugged Star Knight. A star iris appeared.

Chapter End Notes

• ERM, SLIGHT GRAMMAR MISTAKE IN THE SUMMARY(?)

• Okay. so for those not in the know: a dame is a British honorary term for a woman given by the monarch. reminder that i'm American. and me personally, i think using a British term when you're from America is silly (unless the character is British themselves)

• Whole house bi, bi, bi

• "I think that some people didn't know that we were Storm Dame and Star Knight" NOBODY CARES MY GUY 😭

• 'The Ebrum family, Kirby, Jaylee, Meta Knight, Sword Knight, and Blade Knight walked to the kitchen to see the food being done and also to see Jaylee's parents talk about their aliases.' I should've rewrote this scene better

• Drink (sweet tea or anything non-alcoholic, i don't want to be the reason for someone's death) every time someone sighs

• This is my top 5 least favorite chapters of this series now that I'm looking back at it

Chapter 4: Future Star Warriors

Chapter Notes

See the end of the chapter for notes

The Star Team walked to Star Warriors in Training when they were going to get Jaylee to continue her Copy Abilities Training but they saw that the first room's door was opened. They walked into the room and saw five teenagers, Starstone, and Sunstone.

"Hello, who are you?" Jaylee said to the purple puffball.

"I am Jagger, my sister is Blaze, the puffball who is orange."

"Nice to meet you two, I'm Jaylee."

"Who are the other people?" Jagger said.

"The one that's the same species as you, your sister, and me is Kirby," Jaylee said. "The one with the ponytail is Tiff and the one with hair on his eyes is Tuff."

"The person with the same species as Tiff and Tuff is Axe. Their parents were Star Warriors and they now live with their grandmother. The one who has a heart on her shirt is Lamya, and lastly, the one with stars on their shirt is Folo." Blaze told the Star Team.

"Folo sounds like Fofa." Tuff commented.

"Who's Fofa?" Axe questioned.

"Fofa is a combination between Fololo and Falala, Fofa worked for Nightmare Enterprises until being sliced by Slice n' Splice into Fololo and Falala." Tuff answered.

"Are they okay?" Folo said. The Star Team nodded.

"Good." Folo smiled.

"I forgot that Sunstone and Starstone were in this room." Jaylee said.

"Poyo!" Kirby said. Kirby, Tiff, Tuff, and Jaylee walked to Sunstone and Starstone.

"Hello Jaylee, no time, long see." Starstone said.

"Starstone, it has been 11 days since we saw each other and beaten Nightmare." Jaylee said.

"Oh." Starstone sighed. The future Star Warriors ran to the Star Team and the two gems.

"How do we be Star Warriors?" The teenagers asked.

"Train just like I did, you guys can get a Warp Star." Jaylee said.

"Cool, I want to get a Warp Star, what's a Warp Star?" Axe questioned.

"Warp Stars are these stars that you can use to fly or something and you get them in these cases." Jaylee answered.

"Awesome!" Lamya smiled.

"Are you guys ready to go home?" Jaylee questioned.

"Poyo!" Kirby smiled." Tiff and Tuff nodded. The future Star Warriors said goodbye to the Star Team and a star iris appeared.

Chapter End Notes

• I love how I added these brand new characters, only to have them do nothing at the final chapters

• I only added Sunstone & Starstone, but not Kikker (frog in dutch, which I got that name from Amino) and Zuri? 0/10 chapter, we have to jump younger me for not adding my first ever Kirby OCs.

• Lowkey like the explanation of Fofa (Lola in the sub) for the people who didn't watch the Kirby anime.

• Speaking of Fofa, why did 4Kids even change Lololo and Lalala's names to Fololo and Falala?

• Anyways, this is the last chapter until we get to the gayest chapter that this series has to offer (aka the one with Jaylee and Tiff having their first ever date)

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